PITCH FEEDBACK: THE IMPORTANT BIT!
- Strong and bold pitch and idea but be be aware of your audience, this might not fit in with all charities.
- Research was thorough, and was nice to see the 'experiment,' backing up what I'm saying
- How would the website work/ What software would be used to make it? (Didn't know what to say, something I need to work on, web software knowledge)
- Fresh, new layout!
- Not sure that the entrance page is actually required, search ultility on the main page.
- Unclear of where the sense of community lay.
- Consider the practicalities of how the my channel page would actually work.
- Key insight was good, the use of conversation and dialogue between audience and charity on the site.
- Loved the leave chocolate! sweet!
- Really liked how the brand and feel continued throughout every aspect of my presentation.
- Really enjoyed the idea of hiding information and making it easier to find and use.
that's all I can remember really, the pitch overall went well.
Communication Points I would consider for the next one:
- Really consider the tone of voice and audience - Who am I talking to?
I think that I may have been a little overly confident and slightly brash with my approach, which was down to nerves but next time I will really think about it.
